Nowadays, food has become easier to prevent. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specfic reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the present time , cooking at home is considred to be immensely different from restaurants. Therefore,some people keen on dining out while others prefer to stay at home and cook for themselves.As for me,i would rather prepare food at home as opposed to going to food stands or restaurants.Eating in is both much healthier and has nutritional value and I will point out why in my essay.
At the present time , cooking at home is considred to be immensely different from restaurants. Therefore,some people keen on dining out while others prefer to stay at home and cook for themselves.As for me,i would rather prepare food at home as opposed to going to food stands or restaurants.Eating in is both much healthier and has nutritional value and I will point out why in my essay.
Firstly,cooking at home is much healthier than eating out.For instance,when you want to cook something ,you make sure that the products are fresh .
On the contrary, restaurants do not provide fresh food .Sometimes they mix remained foods with fresh food in order to compensate their expenses. As a result, these foods can make people feel unhealthy.Thus,preparing food at home is much more beneficial to your health and it is the best choice for me.This is therefore one of the basic reasons I prefer eating in to eating out.
Secondly, I think food loses its nutritional value if it is cooked carelessly in a rushed manner rather than preparing food in a slower pace.So,the way I cook is more scrumptious and keeps its freshness for a long time.To illustrate, a restaurant will not cook food gently and because of this the food loses its vitamins which are vital to everbody’s health.I think that makes restaurant food disgusting.For this reason,consuming food at home is always a better option and has plenty of nutritional value.That is why I prefer preparing my meals at home to buying them.
To sum up,home food is both much healthier and nourishing than eating out all the time.Thus,I opt for eating the majority of my dishes at home and like this much better than eating in a restaurant.I believe that I will keep on doing this way of life as long as I’m a living person.(
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28476128261 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.357491998 49.4020404114 355% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.0 106.682146367 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.0 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.5 7.06120827912 389% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231515659143 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131647731356 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502662626554 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153134145809 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044705251371 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.