Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying altrenative medicines adn treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Health has always been a matter of great concern as it is said that “health is gold”. Recently, more and more people have their sicknesses and diseases treated at home using some unprescribed remedies. Although advocates to such matter has their reasons for why it is immensely positive, several problems have already been witnessed.
To some certain extent, using alternative medicine or treatment has its own merit. First, treatment for some common sicknesses are available anywhere, anytime thanks to the widespread Internet and social media. With just some simple clicks, people can access to a variety of therapies as well as feedback from the former users without spending a great amount of time and money going to the hospital. Second, in some rural or isolated areas, visiting doctors is not always possible, especially in emergency cases, being able to perform first-aid practices on the patients may help save their life.
However, due to several latent consequences, using any kinds of remedies or medicine without diagnosis or prescription from doctors can be risky, or even fatal. First of all, any health problems need to be checked and diagnosed carefully by experienced and highly-skilled people, like doctors or pharmacists. Before drawing an accurate and precise conclusion, performing any therapies or taking medicine can be dangerous. Next, there is a wide range of information on the Internet, which makes it really challenging to choose a trust-worthy source. Spams and fake news have arisen as an alarming issue in terms of the reliability of whatever is posted on the Web. Therefore, mistaken choices may lead to unexpected results and regret as once health is affected, it is not easy to recover.
To conclude, either visiting doctors or taking alternative treatments or medicines has its own merits and demerits. However, patients, no matter what their health problems are and how good their health condition is, must go to the hospital or doctor for more accurate and further consultation to avoid unwanted consequences.
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- Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying altrenative medicines adn treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor Do you think this is a positive or negative development 89
- Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor Do you think this is a positive or negative development 89
- Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor Do you think this is a positive or negative development 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'choosing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: choosing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29051987768 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84021643391 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608562691131 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1474757072 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178489616482 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560681335106 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379973826455 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113090578733 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430966735882 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.