Nowadays it seems that people tend to wastea great amount of food
Why do you think it is happening? How can we solve this problem
It is true that in recent years, the amount of unused food which is thrown away tends to increase dramatically. The reason for this tendency are varied and there are some effective approaches that shoud be taken into actions to solve this problem.
There are two main explanations why a great amount of food is being wasted. First, most individuals fail to have a thorough plan of what they are going to buy before they shop. As a matter of facts, many consumers only have vague ideas of what food products they might consume over the next few days. As a result, they are easily tempted to impulsively buy foodstuffs that are of littile use to them. Second, the unregulated cultivation of many different crops in many countries might surpass the demand for food of their citizens, which gradually results in an increase in the amount of superlflous food. For example, food wastage in Vietnam has become excessively prevalent in recent years because a great deal of fruit and vegetables such as watermelons or pineapples is cultivated and collected uncontrolably
Some measures should be taken immediately to tackle this problem. Governments should adopt some appropriate policies which provide farmers and local food manufacturers with optimal conditions to export their products to other countries. By doing this, local enterprises will have coutless opportunities to approach prospective customers as wel as create brand awareness in the new markets, which greatly reduces the amount of wasted food and postively affecting the national economic expansion. Additionally, people should make a list of ingredients and foodstuffs that they are going to purchase before they shop. This would help consumers to have time to prepare and make a wise decision on what should be bought , eventually saving a great deal of money spent on unnecessary food products.
In conclusion, there are several reasons why people tend to waste a large quantity of food and some effective measures should be taken into consideration to address this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20606060606 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81927021005 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2706159674 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.153846154 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129491418511 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500364434129 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421842562874 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952646321601 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03985016926 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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