Nowadays, a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A large number of adults today argue that children should not be let to get access to a great deal of advertising. I agree that such promotion patterns ought to be restricted.
When it comes to children’s physical health, banning too much advertising is believed to be a good way to avoid some kinds of illness. If children spend considerable time watching advertisements, which are often delivered to them through a digital screen of a technological device, not only their eyesight but also their willingness to take part in outdoor activities turns to be poorer. Both of those are direct causes of short sight and a sedentary lifestyle, preventing them from properly functioning every day. Therefore, halting long duration watching advertisements ensure youngsters a healthy way of living.
Another convincing reason for not allowing children to soak up a large amount of advertising is that this restriction will enable them to avoid absorbing misleading viewpoints about life. Sexual and violent scenes in some kinds of advertisements today are definitely an inappropriate content for young children because it triggers antisocial attitudes and undesirable evaluation of life qualities, leading to potential criminal actions such as sexual abuse or vandalism. More seriously, images of people shopping happily that equate possessions with comfort can cause youngsters to mistakenly distinguish between emotional well-being and wealth material. Banning those advertisements will guarantee kids and adolescents a normal cognitive process.
To conclude, due to its consequences regarding the young’s physical conditions and acknowledgement orientation, it is vital to seriously impose limitation on the advertisements they watch.
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Why I can't find the essay…
Why I can't find the essay that begins with: "Living in the information age, more and more people, particularlu young children, are bombarded with advertising in mass media."
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
A large number of adults today argue that children should...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74131274131 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2901326408 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694980694981 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7548665829 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.181818182 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196887618851 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687086289969 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437413939053 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108070046068 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526857352355 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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