Nowadays, a lot of offices have open-space designs instead of separate rooms. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The trend toward open-plan office space is indeed on the rise as the world is developing into a global village to forge a sense of unity. Although there are some drawbacks of using open-space models, I would argue that there are far more benefits.
The main drawback of using open-space designs is that there might be unwanted distractions while working, which would affect the company’s productivity. For example, when a particular group of employees is conducting business in an undivided workspace and they need a sense of tranquility and a high level of concentration, but other nearby groups are discussing current affairs and inadvertently making noises by forgetting to turn off their mobile phones. Thus, such nuisance might result in a delay of daily task achievements in former groups, and in turn, decreases the overall efficiency of the company. In addition, open-plan layouts also pose a risk of spreading viruses, particularly respiratory diseases, because employees are working in close proximity and constantly having conversations with one another. Therefore, it could lead to disastrous health-related incidents if there weren’t any safety regulations regarding the wellbeing of the entire staff within the workspace.
Nevertheless, there is a myriad of advantages that open-plan layouts can offer. First of all, using an open-space model can benefit the business financially since it helps to reduce the reliance on heating or cooling systems and cuts down the expenses of electricity bills, primarily thanks to the increased flow of air and light. Secondly, being in an open-space environment helps the staff develop a sense of companionship and understanding through many spontaneous and genuine conversations during working hours. Thirdly, this model also helps improve the quality of collaboration and teamwork as employees can hold group discussion and staff meeting whenever they want, which heighten businesses’ overall productivity. Furthermore, companies can benefit from the shared use of open-space design resources, as they don’t have to allocate finance to buy workspace equipment such as printers, copiers, and staplers.
In conclusion, while some possible drawbacks may arise when using the open-space design, this type of workspace model is far more beneficial and will do wonders for businesses as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 748, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...eases, because employees are working in close proximity and constantly having conversations wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57381615599 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10142583141 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615598885794 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0391874722 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.923076923 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1724267812 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644970026243 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483867075151 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113024906856 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264166691962 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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