Nowadays a lot of people are throwing away the objects that can work properly in order to update them with the new ones, However it is causing environmental problems. How far do you agree?
As different fields of technology is developing, people are motivated to buy new equipments and they are throwing away the old ones. Some modern view holders believe that throwing away used equipments may affect adversely on ecosystem while some reactionarists argue that it does not lead to negative affect. Howewer, from my point of view i believe that it causes to bad affects on natural world.
One of the possibble negative consequences of throw-away society is a waste of products. In addition it also causes to disease. When short-lived or disposable items are recycled from factories come out harmful gases that pollutes the air. Moreover the polluted air causes people to be ill with different kinds of diseases that can lead even to death.
On the other hand throw away society has some benefit aspects.The over consupmtion and excessive production of short lived or disposable items keeps the econmy going by having to constantly manufacture new goods in order to replace the items that are thrown away. The manufacturing jobs develop other aspects of economy.
To conclude, I believe that yhrow away society has more disadvantages than advantages. What we can do is to decrease the amount of items that are thrown away and take care of our ecosystem.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'in addition', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235555555556 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.217777777778 0.155533422707 140% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0977777777778 0.0946595960268 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0533333333333 0.0501214627716 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0355555555556 0.0437548338989 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12 0.122226691241 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0488888888889 0.0403226058552 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7276271165 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0444444444444 0.0326793684256 136% => OK
Particles: 0.00888888888889 0.00163938923432 542% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0577777777778 0.0861772015684 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0133333333333 0.021408717616 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0266666666667 0.011925033212 224% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1281.0 1933.35771543 66% => OK
No of words: 211.0 316.048096192 67% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.07109004739 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20517956788 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336492890995 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265402843602 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194312796209 0.203846283523 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127962085308 0.137316102897 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7276271165 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.037074148 74% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616113744076 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 61.7762288764 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1818181818 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1036349933 49.517814964 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.454545455 127.492653851 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 0.814263465372 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 3.99599198397 501% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.722102542 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.31884057971 1.69124875643 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374288296727 0.332605444948 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0800223902361 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0658021452693 0.0668466124924 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.567155063187 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166917263269 0.148594505496 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155484026139 0.134430193775 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705460185239 0.0742795772207 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.315456751736 0.324371583561 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0261043684878 0.0638462369009 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24951190213 0.228012699653 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136637324967 0.058150111329 23% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9