During the last three decades the laboral market have suffer many changes, while in the past the number of women working full time was really low, today is almost similar to the men. Therefore, it is logical that couple living in the same house could share the household works, this new reality could be beneficial not just only to women that will develope a better career, also will help to have a better relation with her partner.
Firs of all, avoiding some tasks at home, women could expend more time in their careers. In addition, they will be able to be more relaxed and this is one of the most important things to be success at business. As a proof of this, some entrepeneurs as Marcos Galperin (Mercadolibre Founder) o Marc Zuckelberg (Facebook Founder) are agree in that the relaxing time is one of the pilllars for a profitable career.
However, as I mentioned in the first paragraph, the system of sharing tasks is not just only beneficial for the women, it is a great help to a couple relation too. The experience of dividing work at home will create a better relation due a shared feeling of trust and support. As a proof of this, many psiocologys agree in that a huge porgentage of the domestical problems started with arguments about household tasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
...t three decades the laboral market have suffer many changes, while in the past the num...
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Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...in the past the number of women working full time was really low, today is almost similar...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... o Marc Zuckelberg Facebook Founder are agree in that the relaxing time is one of the...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, really, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66071428571 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49329457889 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580357142857 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.7108817411 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134389247331 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573571020671 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337879576945 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092308601428 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319823968803 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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