Nowadays in many families, the grandparents are responsible for bringing up children. Is it a good or bad development for grandparents? Give your own opinion and examples.
The modern world has become more competitive where both parents have to work for supporting their family’s basic needs hence grandparents are given the burden of taking care of grandchildren. This essay will discuss why grandparents should not be overburdened with the responsibility of bringing up children.
To begin with, grandparents are prone to numerous numbers of health conditions such as Blood pressure, Diabetes and other diseases which would require additional care. Because of their age, they will be slow and less flexible hence, any sudden movements would cause more pain. When children tend to do any mistakes will affect the feelings and make abnormalities in health conditions. Old aged people with increased levels of anxiety and stress have more chances of heart attack, stroke etc.
On the other hand, parents should take up the responsibility of taking care of children and also their parents. They need to play a vital role and maintain a good work life balance also should avoid skipping their responsibilities. In a recent survey stated that senior citizens have more stress when compared to younger generation due to not proper relaxation as they already have supported a lot for their family. Both parents should have equal contribution in supporting their children. Moreover, spending some time with children would relatively help parents to relieve stress and other mental health issues. For example, many parents tend to spend their weekends with families which promotes their mental health naturally.
To conclude with, Parents should avoid the habit of giving too many responsibilities to old people instead should organize their time with children to maintain a healthy relationship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore chances of heart attack, stroke etc. On the other hand, parents should take u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43866171004 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84140379827 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583643122677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3335957141 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155269241851 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599196205754 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523830811504 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108475877352 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607290172193 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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