Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family meembers like grandparents can take care of their children, while other think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is thought that working couples have relied on their parents to get them to take care of their offspring, however, some think that kindergartens are the best places to look after the children. In the scope of this essay, I believe that it is better for children to be sent to the childcare organizations.
It is true that there are some benefits when children are brought up by grandparents. Firstly, senior members have much experience in raising their offspring, so they know clearly about the development of the child. For instance, they know why the babies cry or how to keep them calm down when they scare. Secondly, grandparents are likely to spend much time and effort caring their grandchildren compared to a childcare staff. Additionally, when the children get themselves injured or fall over, they will know how to give them first aid. As a result, babies are adopted good care by their family.
On the other hand, the children should be sent to the kindergarten rather than live with their grandparents. One reason is that if they enroll in the school, they will acquire the typical curriculum. For example, they are able to count to 100 or recite the alphabet, which is better for early brain development. Another reason is that the outdoor activities can attract young learners and encourage them more interested in learning. Performing these tasks help students make use of fine motor skills through outdoor games. Therefore, physical states of children will be greatly improved throughout the academic year.
In conclusion, albeit having some benefits when children stay at home with grandparents, I believe that children should be studied at their young age. Studying at childcare centers not only cultivates their cognitive development, but also improves their physical health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13220338983 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74749892795 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596610169492 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9712753107 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201957245013 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632070821478 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684914146631 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134391292114 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812785828378 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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