Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might this be the cause ?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed.
Self employment is taking edge in the new world. Nowadays, People are becoming self centric rather than to work for any company or organization. According to me there are some reasons why people choose self employment but it comes with many disadvantages which i will discuss in below paragraphs.
On the one hand, People choose to be self employed in place of working for someone else for various reasons. Firstly, people want to become their own boss. In addition ot this, they do not prefer to follow orders which has been given by others. Secondly, the stress conditions are rare in self employement. For example, In my office there is a lot of work i have to do everyday and i have to do the submission at the end of the day. Which causes stress throughout the office hours.
Although people like to be self employed but it comes with many disadvantages. Firstly, Proper knowledge of concerned sector is required to be self employed. People usually ends up lossing all the money without proper knowledge. Secondly, there is no guarantee of income in case of self employment but if anyone is working for a company there will be fixed income every month. Moreover, by working for any organization one can learn at faster rate from their seniors. Because they have much experience in relevant sector.
In conclusion, I believe that self employment is not advantageous for many people. It is better to work for any company or organization to achieve goals of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...o work for any company or organization. According to me there are some reasons why people choos...
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... it comes with many disadvantages which i will discuss in below paragraphs. On...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...eople want to become their own boss. In addition ot this, they do not prefer to follow o...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ice there is a lot of work i have to do everyday and i have to do the submission at the ...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o the submission at the end of the day. Which causes stress throughout the office hou...
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Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...earn at faster rate from their seniors. Because they have much experience in relevant s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83003952569 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71217681506 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561264822134 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3452700029 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8823529412 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458221459013 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135879422691 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114861667629 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274041579473 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593710923772 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.