The concept of a free style work has become widespread in recent years. Many individuals prefer self-employment over the traditional type of work in an organization or company. This essay will discuss the possible reason behind this preference, and examine some drawbacks of being self-employed.
Independence can be the fundamental cause for a growing number of individuals to establish their own mode of work. In other words, these people simply escape from the pressures of work being held under control of managers or owners of companies, thereby setting up their flexible working times according to their own schedule. For example, a recent survey conducted by researchers has revealed that the majority of today’s youths are becoming bloggers not only because of its lucrative value, but also because of its benefits related to liberty which it provides for the earner. Therefore, more and more people are opting for self-employment in order to become self-reliant earners.
Besides, there are some disadvantages that this type of work can bring. Firstly, it can be pertained to jeopardy of failure. That is to say that setting up one’s own business may have certain levels or risks, such as the business may go bankrupt or the resources required for a particular business may be scarce. Furthermore, being the owner of one’s own work means being the sole responsible person for the entire work, and whatever the costs and burdens it carries will be put upon the self-employed person only. Thus, due to its nature which include risks and responsibilities, the free style employment may be cumbersome to some extent.
In conclusion, it is true that, these days, a number of people are no longer working for an institution or company, and instead are moving towards self-occupation. Although this is advantageous in terms of freedom from the control of company executives, it can be disadvantages regarding the risks and responsibilities associated with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, it is true, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24367088608 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09855700608 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572784810127 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0487567762 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.357142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7857142857 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413793447044 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139838479129 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765731289748 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25391317529 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497681508899 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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