There are many ways to earn for a living. Today, a lot of people decided to become self-employed than to become company's employees. This essay will discuss the reasons why this situation happened, and will explain its potential drawbacks.
There are some reasons why people choose to be self-employed. Firstly, people need more time flexibility. This is because being an employee made them to work in a scheduled working time which cause them to have less leisure and family quality time. By being self-employed, they will no longer need to follow company's fixed working schedule time and will have more free-time. Secondly, people want to work with less pressure. This is because employees have bosses and supervisors who always put tasks and deadlines on their shoulders which make them to work under pressured. Otherwise, self-employed people will be their own bosses, so there will be no one that put pressures or demands on them.
However, there are some potential downsides of being self-employed. Firstly, self-employed people are prone to lose money and funds. This is because major sources of their business' funding, which is not certainly profitable, are usually from them. Otherwise, employees do not need to spend money in order to survive in a company. All they need to do are just maintaining working performances and good networking with their bosses and clients. Secondly, self-employed people are prone to have little connections. This is because usually self-employed people are starting their business from small businesses which only contain small numbers of employees, or no employee at all. On the other side, employees usually work in a company which contain large number of other employees and meet a lot of different colleagues each day.
In conclusion, a lot of people decided to become self-employed because people need more time flexibility and want to work with less pressure. However, there are some probable drawbacks of being self-employed, such as prone to lose money and funds, and prone to have little connections.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23939393939 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88223238906 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463636363636 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8603589793 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.45 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345520437593 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120130920237 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914298516515 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225665656854 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452245491993 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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