Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
These days, the idea of setting up a start-up has become increasingly popular. Recently, people have started to opt for self-employment, instead of working as full-time employees in a big multinational company. This essay will discuss what are the causes of an increased number of entrepreneurs including independent working and low wages from large firms. Also, this essay will explore the demerits of having one’s start-up.
To begin with, in today’s era, with advancement in technology and access to multiple resources, people tend to come up with new innovative ideas for starting their own company. The primary cause for this is that upcoming youth do not accept the culture of bossing around; that happens in corporations. For instance, research shows that 50% of people setting up new organization was mainly because they wanted to work independently without management’s pressure. Additionally, one of the compelling reasons could be that the corporates do not pay well. To sum up, due to reasons like corporate pressure and lower-income many people switch to self-employment.
On the other hand, self-employment does not guarantee a steady flow of income as it depends on the growth and development of the start-up. During the initial few months, many entrepreneurs face challenges like no clients, no sales, no increment in terms of profit. McDonald's, for example, initially had the lowest sales among all the food chains in the market, and the owner was about to shut down the business due to no sales. Furthermore, self-employed people do not have the perks and benefits of corporate schemes like health cover insurance, Mediclaim, and food cards. To recapitulate, although there are many reasons to become an entrepreneur; there are some drawbacks as well.
In conclusion, in this essay, we discussed the reasons for becoming an entrepreneur like independent working and low wages. We also explored few disadvantages including the unsteady flow of money and not getting the advantages of corporate schemes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
... resources, people tend to come up with new innovative ideas for starting their own company. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.359375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15032085419 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60625 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2274886665 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.1875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187788825651 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057212253923 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406864262237 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10108206135 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331134106427 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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