"Of all the aspects of social misery, nothing is a heartbreaking then unemployment" said James Adams. As population is increasing, vacancies for jobs are decreasing and thus, number of people ,nowadays, are opting to work for own, in spite of working for others i.e. they are setting up their own companies. However, this can be the case because of many reasons and it, too, have several detrimental effects.
This situation might arise due to the following facts. To begin with, if a person is self employed he can choose his own working hours. To be more specified he is the own boss and can work flexibly at the time when he knows he is more productive whether in the morning or in the evening. For example when a person is working under an organisation he has to follow set of certain rules and regulations, and also his time of working is fixed and consequently, he is restricted to a particular time period but in the case of self employment the situation is reverse. In addition to this,in this type of business one can save more money, by saving the uniform and commuting faires. As a result, more amount of money can be secured.
On the negative side, as no one is to supervise the pupil so they often break the deadline of a particular task which cause burden and sometimes, ruin the whole business. What is more, income is not secured because if a business did not run properly it will affect the income, while in the case of working in a company secure income is given to the worker. To illustrate, if an individual is running a small business, but due to some reasons his business do not flourish, he will not get desired money and if the individual is working as an employee he will receive his remuneration under any circumstances.
Overall, self employment may host lot's of benefits, it disadvantages can't be neglected.
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...host lots of benefits, it disadvantages cant be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, then, thus, while, as to, for example, in addition, as a result, in spite of, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6717791411 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83916046972 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552147239264 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5656856172 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.153846154 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264634250086 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958791192567 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781077533252 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172830627518 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872037873839 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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