Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
In contemporary times, the working pattern of the industrial sector has been changed. People are now, especially the young generation willing to work independently, therefore, the number of self-employed people increasing day by day, not only for independence but also for various reasons. In the following paragraphs, the causes and the disadvantages will be discussed.
On the one hand, firstly, people feel comfortable when they find liberty and freedom in the workplace which is not possible in companies. He has to abide by many rules and regulations such as maintaining the working time, moreover, people sometimes find it difficult to maintain a good relationship with boss and colleagues. As a result, nowadays more people wanted to be self-employed. For example, a freelancer has the flexibility of working time and no restriction to do the job. Furthermore, he has a chance to earn more money rather than working as a fixed salary holder. Secondly, seeking a job that is difficult in the current society. In addition, due to the improvement and availability of the technological device people can now work from home, this opportunity increase the tendency to be a freelancer. For instance, during the pandemic situation in 2020 and 2021, many people lost their jobs and after that, they started their own businesses or start-up an IT farm.
On the other hand, there are numerous examples that after being self-employed many people build up a bright career, but there are some disadvantages too. First of all, to start up a company a man has needed a huge amount of money at a certain time and no possibility to earn a lot of revenue. The company may be failed and people get frustrated. Another reason is that productivity, research shows that when people work alone the efficiency decreases and increase the risk of losing clients.
In conclusion, to sum up all the points above, self-employment is a good option but people have to be careful and work hard to improve themselves both in the case of skills and money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
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Message: Did you mean 'farms'?
Suggestion: farms
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02662721893 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06100370899 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582840236686 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8956792806 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.625 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37716625955 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118134093383 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990695011814 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236806177352 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146990729177 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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