Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Many individuals nowadays prefer to work for themselves rather than being employed in an organization or company. The reason behind this preference and disadvantages to working one-self that will clarify in this essay below.
To begin with, the main reason encourages people to opt self-employment is freedom. That means if a person is working in a particular organization. They will be bound by the rules and regulations of the company and probably have a boss directly dictate. They will not be allowed to do what they want. Some people do not like this concept and like to work according to their own ways. For example, an individual is employed in the army, he would have to follow the dress code, meals as well as times. Nothing everyone want to be bound by the rules that someone creates.
Furthermore, the major disadvantage of being self-employed is a great deal of persistence and need a lot of money to start up a business. That means it takes many years for self-employed person establish a brand themselves. In addition, there is no guarantee that they will have stable income to take care of their family. For instance, during the covid 19 outbreak, HCM city has to take the social distancing policy. Therefore, our economy suffers heavily, many companies had gone bankrupt, and thousands of people are out of job because of it. The self-employed person is also influenced severely.
From 2 paragraphs above, the need for liberty makes people want to follow the path of self-employment. But they may fail because this path is very obstacle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'outbreak' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'outbreaks'.
Suggestion: outbreaks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92775665399 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.922463241 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1275815764 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.2352941176 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425238322582 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120018447981 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933370200416 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251686900426 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108190978264 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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