With today's highly competitive market, The vast majority of employees prefer to be self-employed instead of commiting themselves for incorporations or industrialized contructions.I write up my own viewpoint about this issue and address the abovementioned question in this essay.
To begin with, there have several underlying reaons for workers and one of the main reason for those who chose another career path is getting insufficient wages. Despite the fact that Having an expanded job opportunity, evenly excessive positions in big companies or organisations.Firstly, They had a wrong decision with their chosen profession, they spent too much time for an expertise but there had no practical experiments or accumulate merits in their research, so they are just committed into small companies and having the serious difficulties in covering daily expenses and making ends, so they are likely to resign their current jobs and leave for work to take away a self-employed career path. Besides, it is also part of their personality and are really clear directions in promotion prospects, so they become more ambitious. For a long time in giving decisive thoughts, particularly in their plans, they will conduct their wanted personal lives and work until they are satified with their salary.
With regards to the disadvantages of self-employed. A talented leader can lead to be a prosperous corporation. But that success can ascribe from many features and factors, are likely to be a breadwinner, they have to be got soft skills such as: interpersonal skills, analytical skills, thought-provoking, which are forged before graduation, to strengthen their business. Having an undeniable fact that.Start-ups, who possesses these skills is the minority, are easily to the failure and the disappointment. Besides, To build up their own business, They are also made up some financial expertise or money management skills, simultaneously, having a huge amount of investment or financial sponsors will be superior to people who start up without anything.
In conclusion, it is claimed that being self-employed might be a solution for those who think that could be the satisfactory of their promotion prospects, it can also appear as counterproductive shortcomings as well as some possible obstacles in any aforementioned cases for those that are on the verge of resign, such as failure or pessimistic. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, really, so, then, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4435483871 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3977042325 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.743834094 49.4020404114 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.090909091 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8181818182 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264597417541 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103165466117 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931398817741 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191261268794 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928607270541 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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