Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organization. What might this be a case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
As the job market is more and more competitive by time, finding a stable job is few and far between. As a result, many people prefer starting their own business to working for a company or organization. From my perspective, this case comes from several key factors and has some drawbacks at the same time.
Apart from the unemployment concern expressed above, there are still more than one reasons for people to start up. While it is true that there are many companies with high salaries and appealing promotions which causes a greater condition to achieve a successful career, there really is nothing to compare with owning their own business. Which is beneficial not just in terms of making more money but as a means of shaping and fleshing out their dream. In addition, it also allows them to make choices or get to make decisions while working for company of course they are not allowed to and only do what their boss tell them to do. Another reason is to satisfy themselves for building something their own, to feel proud of or to feel luxurious and be respected by other people. However, this is definitely not for everyone because of its disadvantages.
First, running a company requires a lot of time and money but it not always successful like people think. With the competitive environment like nowadays, the longer a company stands in a field, the stronger it becomes so it quite difficult for a newbie to have a stand or achieve the same prosperity. Moreover, the industry is now scarce of new business idea so if they want to start up, their plan must be unique or inspirational enough to appeal to clients. Secondly, working as a self-employed person is not a stable job; therefore, their incomes go up and down every month due to their profits. Lastly, the paperwork is really stressful with all the bills, the calculating expenses, if they are wet behind the ears, they cannot handle all of these and lead to losses in business.
In conclusion, being self-employed may bring a lot of benefits but it also holds many risky propositions that every mistake pays a price.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, of course, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74450549451 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68893458803 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6636064422 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.133333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222545624329 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659716493405 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571364381334 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139243573799 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437663951388 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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