Capitalism started to thrive after collapse of communism in 1990s and triggered people to have more opportunities. Hence, many people choose to work for themselves rather than companies or organisations. However, there are also many drawbacks to run own businesses. This essay will discuss about reasons people tend to to self-employed and negative aspects.
To start with, there are two main reasons that people attempt to run their own businesses. Firstly, capitalism indeed make people incredibly rich and hence, many hope to become an entrepreneur in order to raise their revenue. In other words, they would run their own enterprise to achieve their goals as well as adequate wealth. For instance, Bill Gates, Steve Jobs and Mark Zuckerberg established huge company with help of creative idea and accomplished their goals and sufficient assets, which is great inspiration for those who would like to start their businesses. Secondly, retirees still need to dedicate for their offspring and their bright future. Thesedays, people could live longer than 80 but most of people might retire approximately mid-60s because of the lack of stamina. That may deteriorate further quality of life due to less incomes.
However, people should recognise downsides of running businesses. The most common failure is lack of knowledge of business. There are lots of external and internal factors that may devastate business and it is even struggling for whom he or she has graduated from business course in tertiary institution. Moreover, if businesses undergo hardship due to other factors that you cannot control, it will be extremely stressful. For instance, not contagious is the only biggest enemy for farmers but also natural disasters, like tornado, typhoon and earthquake, may be the causes of uncontrollable factors and hence, this would bring you bankruptcy and liabilities.
In conclusion, lots of people choose to be self-employed in order to achieve their goals or retirees run businesses for the rest of their lives. However, there are adequate factors that might ruin your business. Therefore, consideration about disadvantages should be prioritised.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1990s'.
Suggestion: in the 1990s
...d to thrive after collapse of communism in 1990s and triggered people to have more oppor...
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Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
... will discuss about reasons people tend to to self-employed and negative aspects. ...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hope seems to be countable; consider using: 'many hopes'.
Suggestion: many hopes
... make people incredibly rich and hence, many hope to become an entrepreneur in order to r...
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Line 3, column 705, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...s, people could live longer than 80 but most of people might retire approximately mid-60s beca...
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Line 3, column 839, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun incomes is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...eriorate further quality of life due to less incomes. However, people should rec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46865671642 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91248149381 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573134328358 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.5218390717 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4210526316 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6315789474 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36842105263 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25501948571 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744771838375 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077727636673 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175987792106 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807580884483 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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