Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
In the present days, the numbers of individuals who start their own companies are increasing because there would be much less problems to deal with to be self-employed. This essay discusses reasons why this aspect become more popular and what could self-employment can bring in as drawbacks. I strongly believed in self-employment over being employed.
There are two main reasons about work space environment and working hour on why people nowadays prefer being self-employed over working for a company. Company employees may have to worry about whether it is appropriate to do any actions in workplace because there are eyes looking at the behavior at all time. In addition, the poor collaborating atmosphere has a huge effect on the work quality. For instance, young graduates will not be working well surrounding with the aged workers. Moreover, the strict working day requires all employees to follow which might not bring the best performance outshone for work because of personal problems. So, the more flexible in time self-employed has, the better-quality works have been produced.
Therefore, many individuals would better be self-employed, rather than work for any organization. However, there are some conditions whice are not beneficial that might come from the decision.
Owning a company would probably be difficult for fresh-graduated people. In the first stage of establishing a new one, there will be financial and other types of problems occurring. The need of experience would be applied to figure out how the solution will be. The lack of experienced worker in the self-employment would lead to the inability of problem solving. Furthermore, to be trust by the co-workers or any organizations that are dealing with the self-employed person, they have to create and invent their way to the success which take time. If they did not gain the trust, afterward, they would just fail.
From the reasons mentioned above, I mightily suppose that people choose to be self-employed, rather than to be employed by the company because of the flexibility of being self-employed and better working atmosphere. Even though, there are still some disadvantages such as the financial problem, or lack of experienced worker to help with problem and solution. The drawbacks can be outweighed by the advantages and can be resolve in future day of business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun problems is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... increasing because there would be much less problems to deal with to be self-employ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31034482759 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10151609579 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1062940663 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.1 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.85 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.563657562876 0.244688304435 230% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170319801073 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13798920287 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339180520066 0.151304729494 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796976501511 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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