Lots of people prioritize employing themselves over working for a company or oganization at present. This emerging phenomenon is understandable and I will elaborate on my views of the reasons and adverse consequences of that as follows.
To begin with,the resons of people's favor of being self-employed are generally from people's characters as well as the desires of making more money. On one hand, some people would not like to be managed when they are working, they want to be in a free-working condition rather than pushed by the bosses or managers. On the other hand, compared with the fix salaries earned in firms, they could make more money all by themselves because they may be more creative or more energetic when they work alone. This alternative world can offer them these kind of platforms enough due to the rapid development of the society.
Additionally, the negative aspects of being self-employed are obvious in this fast changing era. For one thing, the self-empolyeed people would not have stable salaries due to the risk of their work. As the products or service they offer may not pay back them in time. Some business like desingning as well as consulting are highly dependent on the these people's performance. This uncertain condition is a major concern of them. For another thing, they may not have a stable working time either, since the customers would buy their products or service at any time in a day, the people have to stay up for working bacause of these demands that bring them profits.
In all, the self-employeed people can have more freedom at work, even make more money than those who working in the companies or organizations. However, the freedom itself may bring them disadvantages, too.
- You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons Write a letter to your boss In your letter Explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need Explain how you will keep up to date while you are away Suggest how y 73
- Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money Write a letter to the local council in you letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and 89
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both view and give your opinion 61
- Some people believe that children are given too much free time They feel that this time should be used to do more school work How do you think children should spend their free time
- Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor Do you think this is a positive or negative development 89
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Suggestion: , the
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Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, so, well, another thing, kind of, as well as, for another thing, for one thing, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9587628866 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8150434241 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54295532646 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3838816136 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.071428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294477169851 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101152495064 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913942781139 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168298821709 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578604450388 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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