Currently more people prefers to be self employed, than to work for a company or organization. People chooses own businesses as it might provide autonomy and flexibility and self respect than any other employment while it holds plethora of risk factors, as it completely depends on the person who do it. This essay shall provide possible reasons why the people chooses self employment and potential risk elements.
First of all, modern generations do not like over control, by any means, either from employer or by superior. Most of the people are fed up with routine jobs and shift duties, which ultimately leads them to self employment. As people are working for themselves, they will be more honest in their jobs and can result in success; unlike doing jobs for others might feel like a slavery, it will make some positive attitude. Moreover self employment provides exponential flexibility, for instance one can take leave whenever he want, nobody will question him. Most importantly, one can persue his favorite job without any restriction, ultimately leads to job satisfaction, hence it will enable maximum out put. On the other hands, it is highly risky to run a self employment venture, as it need a number of parameters for the success and smooth run. Initially for self job, it needs some kind of initial investment, it become the sole responsibility of the person. Taking decisions and selecting employees and formulating strategies need high level of cognitive operations, but for employee in a company does not have such tensions. Even if the person do precise operations in all areas, nobody can assure the success of the venture, some time it will go to big flop and leads to bankruptcy. Self employment involves high level of stress than a normal employee in another firm, according. to recent research suggestions. Overall, due to its huge flexibility, autonomy and self respect than a regular employee, most people chooses self employment but it’s risk elements are enormous. A self employee should perform their each actions in extreme precision to avoid any failures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to own'
Suggestion: to own
...company or organization. People chooses own businesses as it might provide autonomy...
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Line 1, column 415, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...employment and potential risk elements. First of all, modern generations do not ...
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Line 1, column 850, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...y, it will make some positive attitude. Moreover self employment provides exponential fl...
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Line 1, column 953, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...instance one can take leave whenever he want, nobody will question him. Most importa...
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Line 1, column 1017, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on him. Most importantly, one can persue his favorite job without any restriction...
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Line 1, column 1137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., hence it will enable maximum out put. On the other hands, it is highly risky t...
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Line 1, column 1407, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...eds some kind of initial investment, it become the sole responsibility of the person. ...
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Line 1, column 1908, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cording to recent research suggestions. Overall, due to its huge flexibility, au...
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Line 1, column 2189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xtreme precision to avoid any failures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09620991254 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79098145318 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586005830904 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0937270216 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.533333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311033886183 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107710990476 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891196823423 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311033886183 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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