In recent times, many people prefer to be self-employed as opposed to being a worker of a company or organisation. In my opinion, there are several positive reasons for this trend, and the employees would face with particular problems.
People are interested in being employees, who provide themselves with jobs when they know its advantages. The primary one is that such employees work on not only convenient but also comfortable condition , and this is the incentive of majority workers. For example, the owner of the IT related job can work everywhere , only connection with the internet and their laptops are enough to work. In addition, the self-employed workers also earn much higher income compared to others because of damand on them. In other words, most of self-employed professions consist of online work, and people use a lot online services.
Regarding the drawbacks of the self-employee, the main one would be connected with health issues. The individuals spend their most time in front of screen , and this impacts their eye side negatively. It is generally known that living passive lifestyle cause obesity and it is easy to happen with people who work at home especially with online workers. A part from that, employees who work for organisations take pension after their working life , but there is no one who does it for self-employed workers.
By way of conclusion, people want to provide themselves with a job in order to recieve much money , although they might have some problems.
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employey rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 78
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employey rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 73
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Why might this be the case What could be disadvantages of being self employed 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0971659919 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86641737653 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603238866397 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.6313241756 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.916666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289510737677 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10780106338 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104303656969 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183952874887 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101307775557 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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