Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
In modern times, more and more children are playing computer games.This essay will discuss bad effects associated with computer games and then offer some measures to tackle this issue.
Generally speaking, there are two main results of playing computer.First and foremost, it has been proven that computer games may lead to isolation for children. That mean, children like to be lonely and which in turn lead to be unsociable person.For example, computer games like fortnight. Another effect of playing games in computer is that children be more violent and fight others.
However, there are viable solution to address this problem. Firstly, parents should observe their children what they play and put times for playing.Secondly, government s should prevent computer games in their country especially these which have more violence. Finally, parent parents should sit with their children to reduce the time children sit alone.
In conclusion, it must be said that it is difficult to find solution to this issue.Isolation and violence are the principal results of playing computer games and this can be tackle through put rule by governments to prevent games in computer, family specifize time with children and observe their children
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44329896907 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72082930472 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1213674311 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.125 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338545156029 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160322675707 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934052909578 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218071169896 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556568992417 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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