Nowadays, many people spend less time at home. What are the causes of this? What are the effects of this on individual and on society?
In this fast-paced era, people got ample of tasks to perform in a day and most of them are done outside the home. Therefore, masses get a small amount of time to stay at home. The reasons and consequences of this have been discussed in the following paragraph.
There are numerous reasons behind spending only a little amount of time at home. Firstly, nearly 80% of the population is working, they spend 8 to 10 hours at workplaces. Secondly, approximately 2 hours per day are spent while traveling to work because, in peak hours, there is heavy traffic congestion on roads. Lastly, due to the advancement in technology, people prefer to gain more advanced skills to become multi-talented. Thus, they engaged themselves in extra-curricular activities such as learning various languages, computer skills etcetera.
This trend has many consequences, most of them are pernicious for an individual. These days, masses do not get enough time to spend with their families that can potentially make them mentally unhealthy. Moreover, parents do not interact with their children due to lack of time. Thus, children could indulge in bad habits which can deteriorate their future. In addition, mutual trust, bonding, and feelings will slowly vanish leading to loss of humanity.
In conclusion, people should manage time properly as once it is lost, never comes back. There should be a balance between work life and personal life so that people can live their life to the fullest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11983471074 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82847843915 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648760330579 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6092572755 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.6 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201278917064 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623834911111 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539026961261 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113419419738 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552424863996 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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