Nowadays many people work from home. Some think it is beneficial, others think it may distract the family routine. What is my opinion?
In today’s world, when the issue of working from home comes into view, there exist conflicting opinions. Some people strongly agree with the opinion that working from home is beneficial. Meanwhile, others share the view that it could disturb the family schedule. Both of the views have their own merits which require careful consideration.
On the one hand, some believe that working from home could bring many benefits, especially in this infectious disease period. For example, in the Covid-19 situation, many countries are forcing their citizens to stay at home in order to implement the social distancing policy. Hence, people are unable to go out for their work. Only by working from home can employees maintain their work. Therefore, the plus side of this working method should not be overlooked.
On the other hand, there are some arguments in favour of this issue. One of the strongest arguments is that it can affect the family routine. If people pay all their attention to their work, they will be able to forget to do household chores such as cooking, cleaning, washing and so on. In addition, sometimes they even ignore their children. Studies in this field have shown that most women who work from home will likely to delay 48% of their daily housework. Consequently, it is obvious that working from home may influence the family.
Given the aforementioned points, it may be concluded that although working from home provides many good points in the epidemic periods, it also brings some menus point related to the family. From my point of view, I am utterly convinced that this working method may lead to some negative impacts on the family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98201438849 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47461361444 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9208792037 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4705882353 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297777739184 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104356207637 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071781932223 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191837007962 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176941269352 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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