nowadays many people working from home some think it's is a beneficial to the employee other think it may distract the family routine what is your opinion
Gone are the days when was working at home had unplusible think.This notion has undergone see changes ever since the technology in lime light. In this epoch a group of people are performing duties from apartment which has ample of merits where as another group of the view that this approach may adversely affect the house routine. I shall elucidate the both prospective along with the my slant in ensuing segments.
First and foremost, reason why continuing a job from house has myriad advantages, Owing to this flexible timing people can complete their work without anxiety and pressure. To be more precise, worker can enjoy their work due to lack of time destruction which give them the chance to complete their task in a better way. In 2020 for instance during covid-19 pendemic 80 % employees worked from living place and 97 percent of worker showed extra creativity which produce productivity.Resultly,acehieving task from home has productive result. Not only but also means less traffic election hustle bustle and less consumption of fuel such as petrol and diesel.By this I means,less traffic has a solution of reduced the road accident where numerous masses lost their life on daily basis 2020 April to September during 6 month only 2% for accident had recorded by traffic police.Consquently less movement produce the less chance of a traffic and unnecessary accident.
However, home based job disturb the house routine and rest of family members work.To illustrate, a group of masses could not make the balance between home and office task which make them more exhausted.For example some time women do not pay attention their house chord , family may get a disturb and due to family work she might not pay attention on meeting task . working at home they can do to achieve both task easily.Neverthess they can look after their child and complete their office task hence working home has a plethora of advantages.
To recapitulate, after analysing both view I vehemently vouch that although, working from house may have a few obstacle yet this approache have enormous merits which is productive for employees and nation's holistic growth.
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| 2020-10-12 | sardarni kaur | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, for example, for instance, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10511363636 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0067753947 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.9106225085 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.7 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183324324162 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705547106932 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469828041921 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108526974615 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296261645322 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.