Nowadays many places of natural beauty such as beaches, lakes and mountains are getting littered with plastic bags, cans, bottles and other garbage. Why do you think this is happening? What can be done in order to prevent it? Give your opinion including reasons and examples from your own experience.
We always found there are many ways to destroy nature but only few ways to recover this, nowadays many people using plastics in every material yes i agree there are many benefits of using plastics in our daily usage but same time it is very harmful to the nature and we always underestimate this fact. There are many reasons behind increase global warming like increasing carbon dioxide through emissions of patrol, diesel, coal and other natural sources, also there are been continuously increasing the numbers of vehicles and industries. But the usage of plastic also very harmful as its generated huge gases in atmosphere and it's really not good.
And the most verse thing is that people not caring about atmosphere around them and intentionally or unintentionally they create nasty places. Mostly it happens in undeveloped and developing countries. The people who are leaving near about sea shore they through all their garbage in the sea and beaches are affected by this and too much bad smell people can experience around the beach area, and also after drinking tea or cold drink many people throwing their cans, bottle on roads or street it's cause to making nasty atmosphere, and indirectly its effect on counties tourism and its value in the world.
As per my own experience as i have already told, these things mostly happening in undeveloped and developing countries i am a part of a developing country India we are still struggling for many radical services and the major issue is the we don’t have adequate sanitation service in our country consequently the place become dirty and it will effect on human being many disease and illness has raised because of this condition.
It’s not impossible to prevent these issue and one day we will be also one of the cleanest country in the world. But for this we need to take some good decision. And it’s depends on our government and civil society like both are 50-50% responsible for make these changes. If government will make some rules and some appropriate sanitation services all over the country it would be better. But people also need to follow rules so we all together can make good environment
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...le using plastics in every material yes i agree there are many benefits of using ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'counties'' or 'county's'?
Suggestion: counties'; county's
...tmosphere, and indirectly its effect on counties tourism and its value in the world. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...in undeveloped and developing countries i am a part of a developing country India...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'we'?
Suggestion: the; we
...radical services and the major issue is the we don’t have adequate sanitation service ...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ntly the place become dirty and it will effect on human being many disease and illness...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'many diseases'.
Suggestion: many diseases
...dirty and it will effect on human being many disease and illness has raised because of this ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e all together can make good environment
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'still']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237113402062 0.247107548796 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.149484536082 0.15552993741 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10824742268 0.0946569551029 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0721649484536 0.0501201869031 144% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0644329896907 0.0437536398559 147% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113402061856 0.122223957237 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0489690721649 0.0403219363162 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54257085031 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0180412371134 0.0326786765898 55% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0824742268041 0.0861751148067 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0154639175258 0.0214082191602 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00257731958763 0.0119246538136 22% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2173.0 1933.38276553 112% => OK
No of words: 368.0 316.052104208 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88888888889 6.10592293882 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20519365927 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33152173913 0.37474360046 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239130434783 0.284197041944 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14402173913 0.203843217982 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0951086956522 0.137313986986 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54257085031 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551630434783 0.560935902166 98% => OK
Word variations: 61.5835611571 60.7401812628 101% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0911823647 75% => OK
Sentence length: 30.6666666667 20.7725350517 148% => OK
Sentence length SD: 126.107317613 49.5273876611 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 68.6210526316 93.4120437189 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6210526316 15.2821509519 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.221052631579 0.594174754866 37% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01102204409 140% => OK
Readability: 54.5797101449 49.1922392462 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.3963963964 1.69127372897 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.283462354426 0.332604825255 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11853289062 0.102734651613 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0582288774701 0.0668474354756 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.57325166177 0.534917948617 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.20129596437 0.148666948902 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116908908369 0.13441755203 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449198642614 0.0742828286743 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.287166298812 0.324241079732 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00981881159871 0.0640056729886 15% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187890208574 0.22793763319 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252642972307 0.0582452615562 43% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41883767535 29% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.88977955912 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.60220440882 192% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.00200400802 50% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.493987976 114% => OK
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Some grammar issues. Read a good grammar book.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.0 Out of 9