Nowadays many young people in work force change their jobs or career every few years. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Some people have a tendency to quit their current job and choose the best one in order to find a new high-income and competent position. While staying at the same occupation can brings them a number of benefits, I believe that work in the variety range of careers is more beneficial.
As most of people devote a larger proportion of their life to working, obviously they should be satisfied with an adequate salary. Moreover, some workers would strongly feel that their intrinsic talents and abilities have been neglected by both their boss and colleagues. For these reasons, taking a risk and select another career might be inevitable for them.
One the one hand, there are some benefits of staying at the same organization throughout working life. For example, employees might be promised good pension, which means they will have a greater job security and enjoy a comfortable retirement period as well. Additionally, those who stuck doing the same job could probably become more familiar with the staff and processes.
On the other hand, it might seem to be a boring task for long-term employees to do repetitive stuff for a low pay job for long years. In other words, if they could make a strategic decision and shift to another different career, undoubtedly, they will acquire a range of skills and experiences, which would make them a knowledgeable person in a range of related fields.
In way of conclusion, according to aforementioned reasons that people would like to select a new position, it seems to be more beneficial for employees to take a risk and change their occupation than maintaining at the same organization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...hile staying at the same occupation can brings them a number of benefits, I believe th...
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Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ge of careers is more beneficial. As most of people devote a larger proportion of their lif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01094890511 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81934483736 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8841516419 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.818181818 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182838642135 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677722510131 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373509849783 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100629232676 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00886736667269 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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