Nowadays, the mass media including TV, radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
By the advancement of science and technology, satellite communication brings not only updated news in every second, but also a vast collection of channels and newspapers in front of people to select it their own taste and relevance. Mass media such as TV, radio and newspaper keeps the society update on their paradigm changes happening all over the world. This essay is of the view that mass media including TV, radio and newspaper are highly obsessed the way of thinking and the character of people’s
First and foremost, Society gets updated news from any corner of the world. Investigative journalism give a new face on the mass media for instance, media raises allegations to the public figures without any relevant backing, and it publish or on-air through the media and people get confused to listen this type of news.
Secondly, ordinary people are forced to believe the repeated news and it affect their way of thinking and character. In some extent, biased news, biased to a particular country, political or religious concepts, make the situation worst. Nowadays, it is very hard to understand the core of the news because of biased news.
In the in-depth analysis, it can be concluded that, in large extent mass media including TV, radio and newspaper playing a vital role to shape the opinions and characters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02714932127 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69571631063 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592760180995 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8807056683 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.875 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24465362554 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105932465083 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11127516947 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157779133414 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119569538174 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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