Nowadays more and more business meetings and business trainings are taking place online.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that, along with the development of technology in recent decades, the number of online meeting and training business has increased. Although there are negative consequences of this development, I would argue that the advantages of this object are more than drawbacks.
Two of the most important benefits of holding online meeting have mentioned as follows. Firstly, individuals will not require to go out home for reaching to the workplace in order to attend in the meeting. Consequently, people can save their time, and also they will have opportunity so as to program for another activity. Secondly, individuals usually use from the personal cars for going to the workplace. This subject might lead to the heavy traffics specially in large cities. One result of this happening is that, the amount of toxic fumes such as CO which have published to air by exhaust vehicles and are hazardous for people healthy, reduce markedly.
However, this technology may cause some problems for individuals. Lack of face to face communication particularly in meeting business may be lead to that some problem unresolve. For example, about the performing a new project in company, it needs to present a lot of documents and data that in online meeting it is not such possible. Likewise, about the training business, since tutors are not able to reply all pupils question, therefore it may be not benefits as the same as present classes.
In summarize, despite the fact that online meeting has some drawbacks, however I believe that the benefit of using this development is greater.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
.... Firstly, individuals will not require to go out home for reaching to the workplace ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...me, and also they will have opportunity so as to program for another activity. Secondly,...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17692307692 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80728131871 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0274862793 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.538461538 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176866701616 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576811841772 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596225782674 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125046762339 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928120208399 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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