Nowadays, more and more children are appearing in reality shows. Some people feel it is a good trend. Others do not agree.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Reality shows on TV are becoming increasingly popular these days. Some feel they give a ready platform for the participants to showcase their talents and become famous overnight. However, others claim there is also an ugly side to grapple with. In my view, while talent shows bring a number of benefits such as boosting confidence, there exist some drawbacks too.
Those who advocate the positive aspects of life shows opine that an exposure to the real world of stiff competition helps the participants to pit their strength against the best of the lot, and learn valuable lessons. It cannot be denied that every one faces stage fright initially while performing in front of a large audience. A platform like a reality show removes shyness and grooms youngsters to reach their potential. It not only helps in identification and projection of talents but also in innovation and experimentation under the guidance of experts. For instance, there have been many youngsters who have got opportunities in playback singing, dancing and acting in movies and stage shows. Some of the highly talented ones are still at the peak of fame, proving, exposure at a young age can shape career of a life time.
On the other hand, participating in live shows demand time and energy which may force children to deviate attention from studies,. This may affect their performance in examination, even spoiling their career prospects. This is especially of import as fame may last only a short time and once it is gone, the grand winners may face an insecure future. Another potential danger is that sudden fame may cause the winners to live in a bubble of ecstasy, and when the bubble explodes, they are brought back to harsh reality. At a young age, this can prove disastrous to their mindset.
In conclusion, although participating in reality shows can provide immense opportunities and success to participants, parents and teachers have to take special care of such cases in order to avoid the inevitable problems attached to it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02678571429 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75752519915 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9934625741 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5625 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.072323119084 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240537869797 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266150497853 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0460742829078 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385123649975 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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