Nowadays, more and more women decide to have children later in their life? why? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Never before has there been a phenomenon that females decide to give birth later in their life as it is seen recently. The rational reasons for this issue converge on both building careers and avoiding being under a huge financial pressure, which makes the advantages overshadow the disadvantages.
Perceptibly, there are two main factors that contribute to this phenomenon. First and foremost, career has become the uppermost target of women in this day and age. In the past, there was no gender equality, so that women were always treated worse than men, especially in business. Therefore, in the modern era when feminism is more honored, females long to prove themselves by creating prestige in business and gaining more respect from the opposite gender. Second, women can not stay under a huge financial pressure. Being impregnated can cost them an enormous budget, so-called pampers, milk and clothes, which can be obstacles in the women’s life. This is the reason for females to save enough money before building their own family.
On these days, this movement can obviously be an advantage owing to health. The more mature the body is, the safer the mothers are. There is a news that discussing the drawbacks of having a baby in the early ages, and the result indicates some potential dangers for both mothers and babies, or even mortality. Moreover, a mother who lacks experience and knowledge can deteriorate babies’ health. Inexperienced women do not know how to deal with children’s mental illness and physical injuries whose aftermaths are extremely mediocre for kids’ future. Conversely, the baby can be nurtured properly by a mature mother who has cultivated wealth of knowledge and baby caring skills.
By way of conclusion, career and financial pressure decide the trend to have a baby later compared to the past, and it is beneficial for both mothers and children.
- The map below shows the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014 The map below shows the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014 80
- Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at 4 years old while in others they do not have to start school until they are 7 or 8 How far do you agree with either of these views 61
- in their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways Why is this Do you think this is a positive or negative development 83
- in their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways Why is this Do you think this is a positive or negative development 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
Never before has there been a phenomenon that...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...is, the safer the mothers are. There is a news that discussing the drawbacks of having...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12621359223 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69091467237 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1981468047 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198415380262 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568171151054 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474718089002 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118841831785 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165281777209 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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