Talent has no age is an irrefutable fact. Acquiring high post in the government sector, One needs to be highly skilled that youngsters are fond of these days. Somehow, there is a debate in which some individuals say it is highly beneficial while others, it’s opposite. Though both these arguments holds valid justification but I personally feel that it is a good thing and everybody should accept, the future.
To commence with, The pre-dominating fact behind first thinking is that youngsters not only have more knowledge about nature but also they are highly educated than past generations. To be precise, nowadays parents are sending their children abroad for higher studies so that they can acquire higher knowledge from highly satisfied colleges or the universities. Moreover, New generation comes with modern mindset which means they follow the modern techniques that are cheaper as well as effective. Additionally, The energy levels that youngsters carry is on its peak which can help to do extreme tasks in the less time period consequently the efficiency of the nation will increase.
On the flip side, there are people Who deny to appreciate such things, is just because they think young ones do not have much experience in their livelihood. Whereas, Old people in the government sector have a great experience and skills that they acquire from their entire life. In addition to it, sometimes youngsters take wrong decision. Although they are highly educated, their aggression levels are much higher than other age groups which can lead into certain problems for a country.
To recapitulate, different individuals have different way of thinking that either youngsters on a high position in government sector can be helpful or not. However, due to high energy levels and great education, in my opinion, Youngsters can play a major role in the development of a country
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... the modern techniques that are cheaper as well as effective. Additionally, The en...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'deny appreciating'.
Suggestion: deny appreciating
... On the flip side, there are people Who deny to appreciate such things, is just because they think...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19016393443 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78700867615 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609836065574 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5163106486 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.071428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125472176542 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401084651173 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362464618642 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728440084597 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235801727503 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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