Today more and more people prefer to live apart from their families and some think that it negatively affecting communities. I disagree with this opinion to some extent and I will explain why.
Usually people who is not living with their parents or living with friends becoming more responsible. It means that when they started to live alone they needed to learn how to pay bills, where and how much products to buy, cooking a food for themself. A young people understand how it is difficult to live outside a family, and trying to be more responsible. And it will positively affect a community they are living in, because they respect their parents for doing such things that the do now themselves.
The secong thing is that when they are living with their friends, they learn how to communicate with their peers. And also trying to work in a team without conflicts. If these friends from another country or city they are study another culture. And it helps to socialize with other people. It creates a well developed community.
To sum up, I think that living alone or with friends has only advantages for people and communities. It has a positive impact on society at all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...o learn how to pay bills, where and how much products to buy, cooking a food for the...
^^^^
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...e and how much products to buy, cooking a food for themself. A young people understand...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...heir parents for doing such things that the do now themselves. The secong thing is ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, apart from, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75242718447 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48073451551 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.150740434 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3076923077 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342383083294 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119198637912 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927071703952 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21467779312 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331554301148 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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