Nowadays more people are living by themselves. what are the reason for this. is this have a negative or positive impact on this day.
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, Presently, people have tendency live their own way without any interference of others. Here, I would like to account it's reasons along with it's negatives or positives impact.
There are manifold reasons behind this phenomenon. First and foremost, generation gap stimulate masses to live separate. To illustrate, there are differences in thinking teenagers and elders. Young people do not like traditional methods and they do not share their ideas,emotions, with their grandparents. Beside this, busy lifestyle is also responsible of this trend. For example, folks are busy to earn their bread and butter and they do not spend with their juveniles. Therefore, lack of intimacy and mutual understanding encourage people to live separate. What is more, some students and masses live seperate because have to migrate in mega cities for study and business purposes. Hence, they have to live far away from their family members.
Numerous positive outcome of this trend can be mention. Initially, the trend of self living makes people self dependent. To be specific, people who live seperate have to manage social, domestic, and financial responsibility. As a result, folks are expected to be more responsible and mature. Moreover, people who live away from parents can enjoy life to its maximum. To demonstrate, there is no interference of society and guardians.they live without any restriction or rules. Thence, they live blissfull life. This trend have dark side too,
To begin with, firstly, people do not get social, moral, and cultural values if they live far away from their family. Beside this, they can also join nasty acts such as drinking smoking, fighting in the absence of parents supervision. Hence, they will not become noble character.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, in this modern era everyone wants to uplift the standard of life. However, still I believe that people should not forget the traditional values of life while living separate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, such as, as a result, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3707165109 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80101633186 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2472958391 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.8333333333 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.375 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334888149712 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884838789324 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696962158791 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171674617644 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612976171432 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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