Nowadays most parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. what are the reasons for parents to do this? does it have a positive or negative effect on children in general?
In the time of globalization ,every aspects of live needs taking consideration,particulary childcare.Some claim that the youngsters suffer more parental pressure nowadays than decades ago.In my opinion ,I strongly believe that high expectation is the main reasons for parents decisions .This essay will illuminate both sides of the effect on children before coming to conclusion.
Firstly,thanks to high-standard of living, parent try to do their best while bringing up the child by raising with love ,teaching with right from wrong and making up the best career orientation. Specifically ,they w...
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every aspects of live needs
every aspect of life needs
parent try to do their best
parents try to do their best
they want their children are able to get acquainted with
they want their children to be able to get acquainted with
the youth have less time
the youths have less time
Not only they spend a huge times to overcome the test at school but they also be forced to take part in extracurricular activities like sports
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they nearly have no choice for do their favourite
they nearly have no choice to do their favorites
that parental expectation combine to tighter school schedules
that parental expectations combine to tighter school schedules
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 309 350
No. of Characters: 1586 1500
No. of Different Words: 195 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.193 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.133 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.746 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 38.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.196 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.383 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.772 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.05 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5