Today, technology is ruling in our life . Whether in terms of entertainment, or intelligence purpose. As well as, voilence has a profoundly concern in recent time. Similarly, voilence associates to movies, video games and other programs, which directly affect to society negatively. Whereas, others have a notion it is a matter of recreational and relaxing activity. I would delve both the ideas to support my argument.
To begin with, those people who have belief violence oriented programs do have a major impact on every class of society. Such as, youngsters and kids. Every television program highlights the theme of the story which are completely based with some violent dialogs, picturisation and weapons. Whatever the entertainers do wrong things in these programs. The viewer of these voilent films follows to same. They imitiate the same actions, language and beahviour which reduce to their etiquttes and obedience value. Secondly, unusual loud sounds in it, make to people frustrated . In resulting, these enhances the stress level and create physically and mentally implications .
On the other hand, people who take it as a relaxation activity. Such as in the snipper shooting game player gets the feeling the elationafter eliminating the enemies. Despite that, accepting new challenges as different stages og games uplift the curiousity level and develop impeccable performance. Some people takes it as a greatly source of passtime.
In conclusion, considering the dissemination of violence level in movies and games it would be a biggest threat in the development of children and become harsher in getting moral values. Hence, avoiding it as much as to become the safest place to society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, whereas, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37686567164 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93584122228 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652985074627 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6910842443 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.05 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138924364114 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322800505899 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291924561285 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076861223466 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110801944435 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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