Nowadays movies and computer games containing violence are very popular. Some people believe that they have negative effect on the society and should be banned, others, however, believe that it is harmless entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today’s world, there has been a tremendous development in violent movies and computer games which is favorite entertainment for everyone. However, there is a controversial premise regarding to this although some people reckon that it have affect on the community, the other tend to have the opposite opinion. Let see brief detail about both the views.
Due to advancement in internet, people easily connect to violent movies and computer games. Children are attracted and addicted to these movies which result in violent behavior like aggression, conflicts with parents, fighting and delinquency. Report says that there is increase in number of crimes, murder due to psychological problems in adults and teenager due to continuous involvement in these activities. Research shows that violent games have major cause of homicide in the world.
On the other hand, it gives confidence and winning spirit by playing the violent computer games. Children will learn about the violent behavior and its causes from the movies and helps to tackle violence in their future. It is best leisure activity which helps them to get points or scores and gifts.
To conclude, by analyzing both the views, it is clear that even though violent movies and computer games have significant affects in my point of view if it is used wisely for educating children about its results. They will become successful violent free future generation. Moreover, with limited access of this helps to entertain, relax and rejuvenate the mind
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26446280992 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69534276447 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2762023773 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152139347834 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524659148402 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408977285378 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096258578358 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332874326675 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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