Nowadays online education has become popular as more institute and companies are offering courses online, however, many people prefer the traditional, classroom training or study. discuss the advantage and disadvantages of both methods.
Education is the best key to open the lock of success. Presently, the trend of doing online study is gaining prevalence day by day in institute and companies. By
contrast, some people think that study in school and college by using conventional methods is more fruitful. Here, I would like to discuss the pros and cons of using both methods for study.
There are manifold advantages of both these methods.first and foremost, online study is cheaper for students . To illustrate, the charges of attending online classes are less .Students can download the videos and study material which are share by the experties. Moreover, through online study people can make friends globally and share methods of doing study more effectively. Turning to the benefits of classroom training, students can interact their tutor face to face and modify weakness points with the help of teachers. Apart from it, traditional methods of study is lucrative for overall development. for example, Teacher can not only teach academic skills but also stimulate students for other curricular activities such as painting, dancing, and may more.teachers can also keep students away from the bad deeds. Hence, through this study students become noble character. On the other side, it's dark side too.
To begin with, unlike classroom training, online study helps student only their study. This study can not enhance students personality skills such as confidence, behavior with others and many more, To addition, it may effect on body and creat some problem as headache, week eyesight. Further, traditional methods of learning is expensive. Destitute people find hard to give proper education due to extraa fee of tutor.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, both methods of teaching include some negative points. However, still I believe that it has more benefits than drawback.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, apart from, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36643835616 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68109103447 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595890410959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0183835862 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0555555556 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154702222368 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515627350915 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377848827459 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919620946256 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013427027175 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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