From last few years, online shopping is catching significant attention of public. Besides having many advantages of online shopping, it also have disadvantages in many prospective. Now a days because of the tremendous development in internet field., most of the people specially young generation are more dependent on internet.
First of all, when we discuss about online shopping, it is more time saver than shopping in stores. It is the most easiest way of shopping as our young generation are already spending quality of time on internet. From advertising point of view, internet shoppers can easily promote their products very efficiently through social media and famous sites. The other great advantage of online shopping is that without physical appearance to the shops, customer can easily price of products from different shops.
In addition, customers from rural areas where brands outlets are not there, can online order the products. For instance, in Indian rural areas, where GUCCI, ARMANI shops are not available, still interested buyers can buy easily. Although online shopping have numerous advantages, still many drawbacks are also there. For example, There are many fake websites are available to cheat the buyers with their authenticity and quality of products.
On the other hand, shopping physically from the stores used to be real fun.It could also prevent you from over spending money. Personally visiting shops could also have beneficiary for your health too.
However, there are many disadvantages in online shopping and many advantages in shopping from stores, still I believe that online shopping is best in many ways and it is definitely a positive development of society. With the help of little caution and awareness regarding fake sites, we can take full advantage of online shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
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Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun prospective seems to be countable; consider using: 'many prospectives'.
Suggestion: many prospectives
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Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
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Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'easiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: easiest
...aver than shopping in stores. It is the most easiest way of shopping as our young generation...
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Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the easiest'.
Suggestion: most the easiest
...aver than shopping in stores. It is the most easiest way of shopping as our young generation...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, regarding, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3951048951 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66119751683 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566433566434 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8791315644 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.866666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192905151611 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691179044295 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550763689254 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113729196677 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453500095175 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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