Nowadays people depend on technology for leisure activities. Is this a positive or negative development?
In today's world, technology is strongly developing day by day, as a result, people usually indulge in electronic devices in their free time. This essay will demonstrate that this trend has pros and cons.
Society is now improving day by day and manifold things occur rapidly in a day; therefore, citizens need to gain information about what is happening. A mobile phone or a laptop which can connect with internet can inform user with events from all over the world, so that phone owner keep up with current trend. For example, major social networking site (such as tik tok or facebook) inform update events from the world. Another benefit is that when students know numerous information, they can benefit in learning and having a huge range of bulletin will help Employee to find appropriate job or opportunity. In addition, social network bring funny feeling to watchers and workers can relax by watching some Hilarious video.
On the other hand, there is a fact that human spend too much time on technology devices a day. It is reported that it takes young people 15, 4 hours every week to use the internet, which is alarming. Consequently, it led to several eye diseases and it makes the youth become more and more lazy even neglect work or study. As we see in nowadays, in many Household, family members are likely to prefer indulging in the internet to talking face to face.
In conclusion, the majority in society relíe on technology in nowadays is understandable, but Electronic devices's user should aware of its consequences
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90804597701 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66740972604 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674329501916 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2554904887 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105565628212 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379434952182 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442935855011 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786182691331 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592519101641 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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