It is true that most of the information is obtained by people via newspapers and media as they have spread their roots on global level. However, people have unsurety regarding media news they take. According to me we should have trust on correspondents but the faith should not be unflinching. There are number of qualities which must be possessed by journalists.
on the one hand, I opine that we should have believe on journalism but this believe should not be blind. Firstly, everyone can take news from media such as television and newspapers therefore people have to trust on news given by them as they are major sources of accessing news. Moreover, media does not give only local news but they make able people to get worldwide news. Secondly, some journalists are truthworthy and their prime motive is to protect the rights of community. Thus, people believe on them as they help them in sorting out their problems which they encounter. Furthermore, media publicy everything in front of public in order to provide real information to people and accompanying them to curb many troubles. So owing to it they have to depend on media. For an instance, illegal acts done by people, especially, people who commit crimes are also sorted out with assistance of media as it is difficult for people to go everywhere for taking authentic news they have to trust on them. Whereas, we should not have unflinching believe on journalists some media channels exaggerate the news and provoke the people they do not give news in order to solve the problem.
on the other hand, there are plenty of qualities which must be possessed by true journalists. First of all, the main objective of media and journalists should be protection of rights of public such as to make effects to display the truth among people. Additionally, they should not merely think about their own profits. To be more specific, winning trust of people enhance the fame of media which is basis of their profitability. Besides this good communication skills is also an important quality which must aquire by journalists as if they interact with people in a better way then it would bring benefits for both public and correspondents. In addition to this, helping public irrespective of society economic status also a fundamental duty of media as if there will be a biasness among journalists then they they would failed to meet their basic purpose which is protection of rights. Last but not least, media should give original news to people which brings solutions of problems encountered by people. Also, they should not work under pressure of people such as reigning government as well as they should not have vested interest in parties.
To conclude, although people have trust on media and paper news but this should not be unflinching and the journalists must posses number of qualities which are required to be a true journalist and for helping people.
- The plans below show the changes of the particular area from 1965 to the present day and plans also give a description of proposed changes. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 78
- The diagram shows process of producing oxygen and carbon dioxide in human and plants 78
- The given picture illustrates the life of a honey been. 56
- The natural resources such as oil and freshwater are being consumed at alarming rate What problems it can cause How can we solve this problem 85
- The Table shows the number if mobile phones and personal computers per 1000 people in 2003 in 6 countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as to, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2431.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 493.0 315.596192385 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93103448276 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70140370346 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450304259635 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 744.3 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0262372556 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4090909091 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3181818182 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322160704079 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115543523968 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767054614765 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235777320068 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032795534805 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.