nowadays people live in the society where consumer goods are cheaper to buy .do you think its advantage of outweigh disadvantage?
At present, consumers are the essential part of any purchase. People are live in this environment where consumer goods are inexpensive and affordable to anyone. In this essay I will examine the more benefits rather than drawbacks of these argument and provide my overall opinion.
The primary advantage of this argument is that people have plenty of choices in every product. As a result prices of the product will decrease because of the cut and throat competitions .For instance, in market there are plenty of smartphones which has same features like other expensive cell phone companies such as Apple or Nokia but, the prices are very lowest than this companies.
Moreover, basic things become easier to purchase for any human being. This is because of the cost effective consumer goods. For that, it reduce the gap between poor and rich to some extent because anyone can afford the things. A good illustration of these is that motor vehicle which is very difficult to buy for normal people but due to cheap consumer goods even normal people can purchase motor vehicle.
However,the disadvantage of cheapest consumer good is wastage of materials which directly affect environment .If competition increase,then production and packing is also grow.As a result wastage of material is increased and that affect our environment and create pollution. The best example of this is Delhi city which facing this problem and also life expectancy of people is less than any other city.
To conclude, I believe that cheap consumer goods have more plus points than negative effect. As it create more opportunity to to poor people and decrease the difference between the rich and the poor. Also it has wastage of material while huge amount of product is produced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13148788927 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59712497371 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550173010381 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9314126895 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.928571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157184975689 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581772577279 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690778481331 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874693921157 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381577211759 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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