Sometime inspite of having everything in life, person starts feeling lonely in the world. Therefore, he evokes with stronger zeal to know about his family lineage. Because he feels that it can be benefacial for his inheritance. However, certain people and I argue that it is crucial to give more focus on present and future because by living in present one can create desired future enabling inspiration to the world.
Desire to connect with family and to know core identity, some people tries to findout their family history. When an individual have a question about his existance and feeling of unwantedness from society, makes more effort to digout the past of his roots. Evidently, the abandoned child, if he raised by an orphanage might struggle to find a heart of compassion abd true blood relationship. It becomes his only wish to come up with satisfying ground where he can attain sense of worthiness as well as helps him to build his self esteem. However, whatever has bygone, is unchangable. Thus, one should not emphasis on looking for that.
Having these in mind, present holds paramount significance because by concentrating on future goal and by implementing thoughts into action one can definitely transform the future. It means one only should believe in self-function, which can be acquired by intense hardwork and determination. Take 'Jack Ma' as an example, who faces enourmous failure but ultimately, become most motivated person globally. Also, to payback to the society where he achieved his sense of belonging, created means of job for co-civilians to show his gratitude towards them and leaving his own imprint on the timeline for his upcoming generation. Thus, present is more precious than past.
Although, by being aware of personal family history, one can strengthen his existance if it is positive but if it has any darkside, that can be intolerable. Therefore, I whole heartedly believe that one should focus more on present and future rather worrying and wasting time searching for past.
- Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animal s in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view. 84
- Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs- that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policy are necessary and should be implemented wherever possible.To what extend do you agree with this? 89
- Nowadays people research their family history, some people say this is useless and we should instead focus on present and future generations. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12084592145 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7905924286 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592145015106 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4130434624 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7058823529 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127275414228 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441677230861 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654151126207 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895396103655 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313611834625 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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