Nowadays, people in some countries are living in a “throw away” society,
which means that people use things for a short time and then throw them
away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it cause
Currently, people in some nations are living in a “throw away” society, which means that people use things for a short period after that throw them away. This essay will look at some primary causes and some problems of this.
There are a number of reasons for countries tend to throw away society. The first reason is people tent to purchase much clothes, mobile, and so on but it is not necessary and they use in a short period although all product still activities. For example, many of today’s teenagers spend nearly 35 millions buying iPhone X to show that they are wealthy and fashionable even though their old phones are still in good condition, perfectly functional and still work. it leads to a waste of money therefore they get into serious debt about finance
Another reason is many companies produce the mass production of something with low quality because of they focus on consequence but they do not care about high quality and sell for customers use .These products are much cheaper and more convenient than durable ones, hence, attract a large number of customers. This causes destroy the environment and global warming.Environmental degradation is serious problem of society that is directly contaminates soil and water, air and so on
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to the advent of our throwaway society this is increasing consumer debt and environmental damage hence it is two main problems which result from this society./.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, look, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91803278689 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62146474295 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598360655738 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 244.0 20.2975951904 1202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1200.0 106.682146367 1125% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 244.0 20.7667163134 1175% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 73.0 7.06120827912 1034% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354386182933 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.354386182933 0.084324248473 420% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226139935174 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.207661067419 0.056905535591 365% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 123.7 13.0946893788 945% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -167.72 50.2224549098 -334% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 97.3 11.3001002004 861% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.74 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.69 8.58950901804 229% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 99.6 10.1190380762 984% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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