nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. why do you think people waste food? what can be done to reduce the amount of food that throw away.

Many countries in the world like Africa and Indonesia are suffering from food shortage where people do not get enough food to eat. On the other hand, many people, especially children, and young adults are more interested to try out a wide variety of dishes but they are unable to finish the food due to the high quantity and it results in food wastage. It became a global problem and needs an immediate solution. In the following essay, I will discuss some of the reason why people throw food and suggest some solution to overcome the situation.

Let us begin by looking at the contributing factors to the food wastage, the main reason is the increase in monthly income, people are easily able to afford to dine out frequently in comparison to the past. Moreover, they want to taste different cuisines at the same time.

Take a small family as an example, different members of the family have different food choices. For example, you like to eat hot and spicy dish but your parents would like to go for traditional one and children will prefer to eat western cuisine so they order a massive amount of food and not able to finish the entire servings that leads to food wastage in the end.

Another reason is, restaurants serve more quantity of food what I mean by this is that most people do not have the same diet. For instance, elderly people can not eat as much as young adults can that causes food wastage.

There are a plethora of majors can be taken to handle the problem. First and foremost solution is one should order as much he or she can finish. Secondly, restaurants should reduce the quantity of food, in addition, they should allow people to take the leftover food home. Finally, there should be fine on the leftover food, to avoid the penalty, people will try their best to avoid any food wastages.

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Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59692307692 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32566132352 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535384615385 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1475715806 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344658025066 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119113863697 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766671713569 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242085501709 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124174971808 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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