Nowadays shopping has become a new favourite pastime for young people. What are the reasons for this? Should they be encouraged to develop other hobbies? How?
Write at least 250 words
In the modern world, the youth have taken to shopping as a hobby. This essay will examine the possible causes for this, seek to provide information on alternative hobbies and how the youths can be encouraged to engage in them.
The possible reasons as to why more youths are turning to shopping as a hobby are availability of online gaming avenues and social media influence. Online gaming avenues provide means by which youths can generate income from the comfort of their own houses, by using phones, laptops or tablets and internet: the cash is then used for online shopping. For example, some youths spend a large part of the day gambling on sport betting sites and with the mastery of the betting skills they are guaranteed of wins. Social media has also created means by which the youth are turning into shopping as a hobby in that every social media network has paid ads most of which are about e-shopping. As a result, with almost every young person being on social media, they have access to information and means for engaging in online shopping. For example, on Facebook or YouTube almost every video has an ad on an online store.
I believe that the youth should be encouraged to engage in other activities. Other hobbies could promote creativity and prevent lack of productivity and habit formation. For instance, the youth could be encouraged to develop hobbies and interests such as art and online writing.
The youth can be encouraged to develop other hobbies. This achieved done by engaging the youth in activities that require less screen time, no access to the internet, one on one interactions with their peers or family members and providing financial lessons to them. For example encouraging the youth to be adventurous and to engage in camping activities.
In conclusion, most youths have nowadays taken to shopping as a new hobby due to social media influence and availability of online gaming avenues. They can be encouraged to develop other hobbies which are more productive and promote creativity by encouraging activities that limit access to the internet and screens such as art, and adventure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 175, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one interaction', 'an interaction', or simply 'interactions'?
Suggestion: one interaction; an interaction; interactions
...time, no access to the internet, one on one interactions with their peers or family members and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00280112045 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59363485423 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459383753501 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6764138576 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255107422069 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104278166849 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601320995372 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171136850728 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036706901875 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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