This is a negative development. It only testifies that our society is going to the wrong direction,where core values have been replaced by shallow victories. Remember that is by bread and shelter alone that we live and such a base thinking of giving our elders a few crumbs of bread and roof to sleep in and shirking from the responsibilities is an unpardonable crime. Do you think that are parents are just a sort of orphans and they don't need anything other than these material sides in their lives?
I am afraid from where such streaks of thoughts and ways of thinking come from.I have searched a good deal of classics in literature to find out which great writer has supported this view. I am not talking about certain sophists who just exchanged their brains for money. See the big picture. See those past. How our parents took brought us up when we we so small that we could not speak nor move independently. Nay we could not even express that we wanted food And in those days we were just crying and our good patent gave us the very type of food tgat is digestible to our system. We were so small then, and our parent took great care to keep us safe from animal,accidents or even some evil members of our society that could cause harm to our lives.I am sure that the idea of putting old people in shelter homes comes from the latter group , those narcissists in society who have no thought other thsn their belly or ego or bank account. Had societies made any major strides from the views of narcissists and selfish humans.Dear friend, what are you after in this life? Are you so foolish not to see that you also has an old age and there is a hearse waiting for you somewhere in the future.Perhaps you may not be believing that there is another world. In case that you believe that everything ends here, don't you feel that living a good life where all the members of our society is considered equally is impirtant. Dostoevsky 's Ivan Karamasov in the famous novel, 'Brothers Karamasov ' declares that if there is no God you can do anything. And that is the start of a new style of rebellious thinking, though the original thinkers were good in their intentions and did not move away from the society's good.Another thinker said, that when intellectualbwuestioning moves to negation we must take it as another way of thinking, but the point is to live. So living is important and so is good living. So is respecting the elders if our society who is the real owner of all the stuff we are enjoying. Who made your house?Just think?Who gave you the fees to study in schools or good institutions and earn these degrees and get this paycheck. And you are sending your very honourable members of the society to old age homes. It is quite a shame that we don't feel the ugliness of such gestures. Those who support these view are the victims of their own myopic thinking and will definitely reap the labours of their views sooner or later. I am not wishing bad for them, but only wishing that they get their faculties straight and in order.
I am yet to meet an old gentleman or lady who is happy staying in such shelters. They claim that these places hsve community living, dance etc. Tell me,who wants to dance when your soul is in anguish.When the mind is in distress the steps ought to digress.
So don't try to convince me by telling that these respected old individuals of our societies who are in fact the backbones of every culture are happy in these cloistered realms. What they really want is love, care, and company with their dear ones in the evening of their life.There is no merit in feeding them and imagining that you are doing the right thing.This is the greatest evil hat has befllen in our society and certainly a negative development.
- Hard work versus Luck 84
- Forests 78
- Nowadays some older people choose to live in retirement communities with other people rather than living with their adult children Is it a positive or negative development 61
- Success is due only to hardwork Luck does not make a person successful or unsuccessful Do you agree or disagree Use specific examples and reasons to explain your answer 10
- Duty 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, then, even so, in fact, sort of, talking about, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 13.1623246493 289% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 10.4138276553 307% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 38.0 7.30460921844 520% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 103.0 24.0651302605 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3069.0 1615.20841683 190% => OK
No of words: 680.0 315.596192385 215% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51323529412 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.10654576214 4.20363070211 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5928419188 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 337.0 176.041082164 191% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495588235294 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 945.0 506.74238477 186% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.9314004675 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.607142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0936395608538 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251427169458 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345295528915 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624187809143 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322574452344 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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