Nowadays some people get married in their 30 s age rather than marrying at younger age what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Thesedays, the trend is juvenile to attain marriage life when they will turn into 30 s age compared to age factor of 18-26. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of latter marriage is that young one want well settled in their life with sufficient a job and money whereas, it fas one demerit, they no make strong relationship each other because the maturity level is rise and they lose feeling of love.
To begin with, youngone have no show keen interest to get earlier marriage because they want to fulfill the ambitious of life. To explain it more, they completed an academic qualification in the 30s age and earn a satisfaction income to fullfill necessities of life to maintain balance between them. As an instance, the oxford university reported that 73% of adolescents unmarried who under age 30 s and study in the university.
However, the demerits of 30 age married coupled cannot maintain mutual understanding because they attain maturity level . To say it more, the adolescents no express emotions with each other. A reason is that they are only focus on the job work so masses behavior turn into tired mood. Although, they have free time for leisure activities but his mind not properly free from burden, thus, they are not capable an enhance love affection towards relation. For example, the times of Newyork conducted a survey and found that one third of marriage people ended married life with divorce rates in the United Kingdom who get married in 30s age.
To conclude, the adolesents age for wedding is worthwhile juvenile if maintain relationship with each other focus to obtain a job before the marriage and stress free marriage life spend with partner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, third, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93006993007 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56521727947 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573426573427 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3988510266 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.181818182 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164522776052 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700389401991 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069870363646 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995810004182 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401447100902 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.